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Ultimatum Class: Dreadnought

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This was only made for the Supreme Commander Fanon, but I guess this one is rather unique, as it's my best naval unit yet.
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Some nice concepts, and I have some constructive criticism! The camera angle on all the models are effective at showing as much information as possible without needing more than 1 image, so good job there. The models are simply displayed and good choice of colours. My 1 big point would be that you need to focus on what I call "Density of detail". When I see the model I see a huge, flat panels and lots of tiny little guns. If you look at the UEF for example, although some of their weaponry are unrealistically large (battleship cannons), they've been scaled well to fit the balance of the overall model. Make sure when you model, you scale your items so that they appear to be all part of the same model, rather than bits that could have been downloaded online and thrown together. If the AA guns, main battle guns and what i'm assuming to be a TMD (tactical missile defence) were approx 25%+~ (about 25% bigger) they would look more like they're part of the ship. Good job though.